New drabble

[askye]

I wrote this for the sunday100 It's called Last Dance.

The theme was "The end of the world"

Everyone should get their last wish and Spike got his. In those final chaotic minutes when everyone was looking for someone to be with, he saw his chance. He lured Buffy away with the simple lie, “I saw Dawn, she’s over here.”

She blindly followed him into a dark alley. When he slammed her against the wall Buffy had enough sense to demand, “What’s this?” before his eyes turned gold.

“I keep my promises, luv,” and his teeth slid home. When he was sated and drunk on her power, he kissed her cold lips and grinned, “It’s one good day,”

Comments

[pandarus.livejournal.com]

Ooooh!

Lovely! Brava!

[askye.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[serasempre.livejournal.com]

I didn't do this one because I just couldn't think of anything that wouldn't be silly -- and there it is! My idea! Only it's yours and you did it very well. I like it.

[askye.livejournal.com]

Write your idea! You're story will be great!

[serasempre.livejournal.com]

No, no, I meant, I had no idea how anyone could do 100 words about the end of the world and make it anything worth reading, so I didn't even try, and I still have no clue what I'd do, but you did it, and I really like what you did, honestly, better than any of the others I've read -- which is not to impugn them, since I didn't even try!

Or, you know, to say it more concisely: You Rock