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posted by [personal profile] noracharles at 06:47am on 03/07/2002
It's a good snippet. I think you portray Clark's feelings and denial about his alienness and homosexuality very well.
Are you sure you want to add to this story? Why not let it stand on its own as it is.
If you want to build a story around this premise, maybe you should just use the premise, not this actual snippet. It just seems so... self-contained. Finished.
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